Feature Story

I came across a feature story about a burglar who called the cops on himself. The story itself was informative but didn’t have much to offer. The headline “Burglar calls 911 to save himself from gun-wielding homeowner,” pulled me into the story.

The story gave links which I liked. However, I felt the story could have gone into a little more depth about how the burglar reached the point of being held at gunpoint. Instead, the story just jumped right into the plot. There was no build-up and I feel that hurt, what could have been, a good story.

http://news.yahoo.com/blogs/sideshow/burglar-calls-911-himself-163618126.html

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